Golden Domer

[redsox4441]

Golden Domer
Hey everyone I decided to start a blog aabout the IRISH! please check it out and feel free to comment! Its my first blog so please give me feedback! GO IRISH!

 

[jason_h537]

good luck. ill give it a look

 

[redsox4441]

THANKs!

 

[BGIF]

If you want people to come back, post something there other than a greeting to spark some interest. Good Luck.

 

[redsox4441]

****UPDATE*****
I know that my page has been very bare due to the fact that I have school and have not had much time to "blog," but I hope you will be happy to see that I have updated it with a very lengthy post please read and enjoy. your feedback is recommended. thanks!

 

[coachjohnson]

It's a good start, just keep adding to it and before you know it, it will be where you want it. Go Irish!

 

[Honey Nut Irish]

A few suggestions:
1. Don't use ellipses. Write in complete sentences.

2. Use shorter paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.

3. Buy a domain name from godaddy or something. They are pretty cheap.

4. Check out Build a Website - Squarespace. Although I have never done a blog, I have played around with their tools. It makes it easy to create sites that look more professional and unique than blogger and its counterparts.

Otherwise I think your are doing good. Keep it up.

 

[JughedJones]

Watch using cliches. Also, you may want to read the blog back to yourself a time or two before posting. It may help you clean it up a bit.

For example:

"So really who is this mysterious Jimmy character? Know one truly knows who he is yet."

If you looked at that a couple times and read it out loud, I'm sure you could do a little better.




You're doing pretty good though, I'll look back now and then.

 

[Bubba]

I actually think ellipsis are great...

 

[redsox4441]

Thanks for all the help guys! Please keep cruitiquing my posts, it really helps. Also, I would really appreciate it if you guys followed the blog and read it, I really hope it can grow to be something great! GO IRISH!

 

[BGIF]

I actually think ellipsis are great...

An ellipsis is great.

Ellipses are great.

They even look great when the requisite space is left between the three dots and the preceding word so they don't appear as three periods at the end of a sentence.

 

[jason_h537]

Maybe do a lil more research. Saw some flubs like Russell Scheperd being ranked ahead of Te'o on ESPN, instead of Barkley. Still keep it up, man. Ill keep reading as long as you keep posting.

 

[Bubba]

An ellipsis is great.

Ellipses are great.

They even look great when the requisite space is left between the three dots and the preceding word so they don't appear as three periods at the end of a sentence.

My bad. I guess if you want to get technical, there should be four periods if it's at the end of a sentence ....

 

[redsox4441]

*****UPDATE***** I added some player analyses. Please check them out and comment! THANKS!

 

[redsox4441]

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[Riddickulous]

"Half-God, half-Tim Tebow" when referring to Clausen.

As a quarterback, Tebow sucks. Clausen's a better quarterback.

But these are good blogs, keep 'em up.

 

[redsox4441]

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[redsox4441]

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